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Zero

Story: 5 I find it rather interesting that the characters opponents continues their journey long after they have lost as their stories come together and interact with each other Even after the truce a fight still broke out thus leaves for a more interesting outcome.

Character: 5 still the same guy with no luck but it never gets old and keeps me amused and laughing.


Art: 3 who wouldn’t love stick figure action? Aside from that I was able to understand what was going on.



Yeriel


Story: 4 It moved at a nice pace but that was about it, there wasn’t much action and seemed to kinda drag to me

Character: 4 She seemed rather edgy, who could blame her in a place like where they‘re at right now? She showed no sign of improvement though but she did get nicer towards the end

writer: 3 Nicely detailed and no errors and I understood every word

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Jemu-Katana
Story:
4: The story was well-defined, and very clear, however, it seemed as though there were still some loose ends that hadn't quite been tied up yet.

Characterization:
5: It felt as though the writer was struggling with the personalities of the opponent's characters. While not exactly a fault, this leads to a lack of accuracy. For example, The writer portrayed Zero as more... Airheaded than I would think he is supposed to be.

Structure:
2.5: Too many Elipses [ "..." ], the story's format seemed off, and there are a few grammatical errors, but none the less, It was well done.

Total: 11.5

Whisp
Story:
2.5: It was confusing. Lost track of characters throughout the comic. Even with colour-coded text, it just didn't seem to connect very well with the reader. It also seemed a bit whimsical. Like it was just kind of thrown together.

Characterization:
4: Again, everything felt whimsical and thrown together. The conversations didn't really feel believable, however the characters themselves still seemed somewhat matched to their personalities.

Art:
1: The entry seems like there were cut corners. Like a very last minute thing. There seemed to be little no to backgrounds used, which made everything look rather flat. as well. Stick figures? I mean... for real?

Total: 7.5

WINNER: Jemu-Katana

Ooooooh dear, a tie between the judges. With the magical help of , has ultimately made it to the Quarter-Finals!